April 9, 2015

Hold my Heart #AtoZChallenge

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She entered my life when I had everything. And yet, somehow, when she left I had nothing.

Those long walks, the sweet-nothings in my ears, the twinning of her feelings with mine, the wordless conversations of our hearts, the togetherness of our souls - made us etch our love in stone. Our dreams of the future grew with us, from a bud into a flower with fragrance galore.

Then one day she said - “Goodbye” and went away. 

Shocked and overwhelmed with emotion, all I could do was kiss her and say - 

“Hold my heart and I shall hold yours forever.”

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**This post is part of the A to Z April Challenge and the Ultimate Blog Challenge.**

**My theme for the A-Z April Challenge is "26 Days of Eloquent Writing".**



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28 comments:

  1. Beautiful expressions .. enjoyed reading this post

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  2. saying goodbye is always heartbreaking... touching write.

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    1. Yes, it is definitely not my favorite thing too :( Thanks for visiting !

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  3. Wonder what made her leave. But sometimes circumstances demand such extreme actions!

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    1. I left that open to the reader's imagination, Swathi :) But I will tell you what I had in mind - the girl dies suddenly in the end. :(

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  4. oh that's tragic but I wonder why she left him. How could anyone ditch their partner in such a cold-manner? Loved the last lines :)

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    1. I left it open ended Prasanna. But when I was writing I had the heroine passing away in the end. :( But your imagination could be true too. She may have ditched him too.

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  5. I enjoyed this as well. Beautifully done.

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  6. That's so touching and so beautifully written..A lost love..

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  7. That tugged at heart! Lovely expression!

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  8. Oh, so sad, but beautifully written. So lovely feelings coming through....

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    1. Thanks Eli. Yes it is a sad ending :(

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    1. Thanks Laurel. Glad you liked it ! :)

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  10. Beautifully penned touching story, EM.

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