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She entered my life when I had everything. And yet, somehow, when she left I had nothing.
Those long walks, the sweet-nothings in my ears, the twinning of her feelings with mine, the wordless conversations of our hearts, the togetherness of our souls - made us etch our love in stone. Our dreams of the future grew with us, from a bud into a flower with fragrance galore.
Then one day she said - “Goodbye” and went away.
Shocked and overwhelmed with emotion, all I could do was kiss her and say -
“Hold my heart and I shall hold yours forever.”
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**This post is part of the A to Z April Challenge and the Ultimate Blog Challenge.**
Beautiful expressions .. enjoyed reading this post
ReplyDeleteThanks Angela ! :)
Deletesaying goodbye is always heartbreaking... touching write.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is definitely not my favorite thing too :( Thanks for visiting !
DeleteWonder what made her leave. But sometimes circumstances demand such extreme actions!
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I left that open to the reader's imagination, Swathi :) But I will tell you what I had in mind - the girl dies suddenly in the end. :(
Deleteoh that's tragic but I wonder why she left him. How could anyone ditch their partner in such a cold-manner? Loved the last lines :)
ReplyDeleteI left it open ended Prasanna. But when I was writing I had the heroine passing away in the end. :( But your imagination could be true too. She may have ditched him too.
DeleteHow sad. But written so well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Chrys. Glad you liked it !
DeleteTragic end. :( But, beautifully expressed, EM.
ReplyDelete*Shantala @ ShanayaTales*
Thanks Shanaya. :)
DeleteI enjoyed this as well. Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Quanie and welcome here ! :)
DeleteThat's so touching and so beautifully written..A lost love..
ReplyDeleteThanks Parul. :)
DeleteThat tugged at heart! Lovely expression!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa ! :)
DeleteOh, so sad, but beautifully written. So lovely feelings coming through....
ReplyDeleteThanks Eli. Yes it is a sad ending :(
DeleteVery moving piece. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurel. Glad you liked it ! :)
DeleteBeautifully penned touching story, EM.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinitha ! :)
Deletebrief and lovely
ReplyDeleteThank you Pooja :)
DeleteThat's sad...and yet, beautifully expressed
ReplyDeleteSanch @ Living my Imperfect Life
Thanks Sanch :)
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